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I called you Master

byWillow Rain©
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by RhymeFairy05/27/06

Deeeep

A bit long, but deeply felt. Pulls at the heartstrings this one. I love the imagery of the dog/slave ... nice word usage and impressions here. You come across crystal clear. Maybe edit out a bit, one of those that you have to *feel to follow, and I loved it. Very good poem with a lotta feeling ~

Just me ~

More More More Plaese~!!!!

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