All Comments on 'The Stockroom Ch. 03'

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 18 years ago
Nice one patricia

A quick and very hot little work.

I really enjoyed the role playing.

This was fun.

Well done.

PEATBOGPEATBOGalmost 18 years ago
Super sexy story with clever twist!!!

Well Patti, I found chapters 1&2 to be nice and well written with the right amount of eroticism to make the plausible. I thought you would give us a threesome for Ch.3 but you fooled us with a simply delightful take-off of the Maltese Falcon. Can we expect the threesome in Ch.4? Patti, you never fail to please us! Don’t keep us waiting! Pete.

saw_man1saw_man1almost 18 years ago
You clever girl

Your tag line fooled me completely. I wish more writers would do that. This is another in a long line of winners.

You remain one of my favorites and I remain, your fan.

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