Believable and HOT story that I can relate to as I've had similar workplace crushes on which I never acted. It would be nice to continue after they get out of the elevator, but it's fine to end right here.
man, if elevator rides were like this, i wouldn't hate the things so darn much! great story... and i agree, it would be nice to see this one continued, but it's awesome as is... bravo.
Very well paced, good build up, good context. Keep writing!
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Anonymous06/01/06
Very Sexy
Great build up of the sexual tension. certainly kept me interested. The interaction between the two protagonists is believealbe. (although how often do people really get stuck in elevators) Thank you. I must read more of your stories!
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Bravo!
Believable and HOT story that I can relate to as I've had similar workplace crushes on which I never acted. It would be nice to continue after they get out of the elevator, but it's fine to end right here.
*sigh
man, if elevator rides were like this, i wouldn't hate the things so darn much! great story... and i agree, it would be nice to see this one continued, but it's awesome as is... bravo.
Great reading!
What a great place to start anew, on feelings that seemed to have been existent all along.
Great!
Very well paced, good build up, good context. Keep writing!
Very Sexy
Great build up of the sexual tension. certainly kept me interested. The interaction between the two protagonists is believealbe. (although how often do people really get stuck in elevators) Thank you. I must read more of your stories!
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