surely you can read. Proofreading is nothing more than CAREFULLY reading your own story over and over again to find errors and correct them. Well, Duuuuhhhhh! Don't be in such a hurry to be a famous Literotica writer that you send it before you've proofread it several times. And, do you have spell check? That will take care of some things which need correcting.
Her "fertile" pussy and his "man juice"? Maybe they are making a baby and don't know it? Let's have more of this one with them starting their own family...
by
Anonymous11/19/06
give us more of this good story
don't stop with the aunt ,there is stepmom.
by
Anonymous01/01/07
Pee UUUUUUUU Phew Yuck
You're wierd, that's the most disgusting story I have ever
read, and if you are really into that type of filth, you
must be out of the backwoods.....
by
Anonymous04/03/07
Weird?
Your stories may be called weird but they sure are hot so don't be discouraged. Lots of us love them
by
Anonymous07/03/07
Continue
More...Jennifer is a pure delight....
by
Anonymous08/22/09
stinky cunt
I love smelly stinky cum dripping pussy!! Oh yea, has't been washed for 3 days you know her asshole is ripe also. I'm jacking off thinking about sticking my face in there and LICKING!!!!
by
Anonymous02/22/12
I'm in class right now
and your story got me so turned on!! My panties are just soaked. This so embarrassing because now there's still over an hour left to go before I can attend to my problem and I won't be paying any sort of attention at all. This is why laptops are bad! This class can't end soon enough!! Even your user name doesn't help! :S
English
If you can write...
surely you can read. Proofreading is nothing more than CAREFULLY reading your own story over and over again to find errors and correct them. Well, Duuuuhhhhh! Don't be in such a hurry to be a famous Literotica writer that you send it before you've proofread it several times. And, do you have spell check? That will take care of some things which need correcting.
Great reading!
Her "fertile" pussy and his "man juice"? Maybe they are making a baby and don't know it? Let's have more of this one with them starting their own family...
give us more of this good story
don't stop with the aunt ,there is stepmom.
Pee UUUUUUUU Phew Yuck
You're wierd, that's the most disgusting story I have ever
read, and if you are really into that type of filth, you
must be out of the backwoods.....
Weird?
Your stories may be called weird but they sure are hot so don't be discouraged. Lots of us love them
Continue
More...Jennifer is a pure delight....
stinky cunt
I love smelly stinky cum dripping pussy!! Oh yea, has't been washed for 3 days you know her asshole is ripe also. I'm jacking off thinking about sticking my face in there and LICKING!!!!
I'm in class right now
and your story got me so turned on!! My panties are just soaked. This so embarrassing because now there's still over an hour left to go before I can attend to my problem and I won't be paying any sort of attention at all. This is why laptops are bad! This class can't end soon enough!! Even your user name doesn't help! :S
Skank.
Take a bath for fuck sakes.
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