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A Moment of Truth

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by RhymeFairy05/27/06

truth ~

They say truth is in the eye of the beholder. I think you hit the nail on the head. Sometimes we give in, let go .. and just wanna burst with our wants and needs. Great flow here. The imagery is very dark and fills one with wonder ...
Maybe edit out just a bit ... still you get your point across and it is good ~!!

More Please~

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by LilyMelb05/28/06

Brilliant

Cinders, this is brilliant. I know exactly where you're coming from with this, you know I do, and it states it perfectly. I'm with you hon.....

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by Anonymous10/10/06

I think we have all wanted to die

I think we have all wanted to shut down and either die or "fuck" out the pain. I hear you girl, chin up

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by LeBroz10/27/06

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A moment of truth
A moment of pain
A comatose moment
Won't end it all...

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by duddle14612/19/06

freedom

Totally immersed in pain and agony ~ the soul inside screams desperately to be free. Paints a heartfelt compassion with a few well chosen words.

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by Amyfriend02/15/07

The pain of..

self destruction..drugs, booze, all in an effort to forget. Nicely done, thanks.

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