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A lot of mistakes in spelling and grammar but man the sexual acts descriptions were out of this world. My old 66 year old willy is hotter than a five dollar levitra.
Great reading!
She needs to continue this affair with this young guy and make him a natural daddy so that her cheating husband can support a baby that is not his...
Hot, but...
It needed some further interplay with, discovery by or reaction from the cheating husband.
Pretty good and nice first story
You have a little work to do with your writing and an editor will help. Keep trying to put your fantasies out there. Get the husband's life involved as that's part of a Loving Wives story, both partner’s emotions and interaction. Other wise it just an erotic coupling and being married is of no consequences.
Keep writing
Hot begining
Starts off good with a good plot to your story. Continue with her revenge of her husbands infidelity. I'm sure he has more employees, and how about clients. Maybe she likes it enough to go both ways? It's your call, keep up the good work.
It Happens
My wife done the same damn thing to me.
Hot!
Great story of infidelity and revenge. Looking forward to reading more about this hot slut!
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