All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 06'

SEVERUSMAX:

You make a nice addition to this tale. I think I like where it's going as opposed to where it could have gone. I guess that's the romantic in me. Thank You. Ronnie W.

An interesting chapter for Dry Valley. Thank you SEVERUSMAX for showing me something in these characters I didn't see. Great writing as usual. ~ Red

...it's getting hot in the Valley! Thanks, max, for putting Tom and Bailey together. Now we have to wait and see what else happens, eh? Rock on!

Very Good Severusmax! Now what about the other couple? Hope you or Redhairedandfriendly picks it up again soon.

Thank you.

Do I foresee a wedding in the future for Dry Valley? Great Chapter Severusmax!

To me, this chapter seemed to come out of left field. It doesn't jive at all with how I understood the characters to be from the earlier chapters. Bailey was supposed to be beautiful but shy, especially around Tom whom she'd had a crush on for a long time. And Tom was supposed to be the jokingly risqué but ultimately good, caring guy that would put more value into a woman he was truly interested in. At least, that was my take.