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Effective Lingerie

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by Anonymous

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by Chagrined07/06/06

But an ineffective writer.

"A loving lover"! This thing was all over te place and written like it was from the hand of a Jr. High kid. Get an editor!

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by don-donna207/06/06

Thanks for a No Rape-No Anal story.

Nice for a change--There are at least 10 rape stories out of todays 75 "NEW"

plus several anal that are not in the anal catagory

So a little simple sex activity is welcome and enjoyed.

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by Anonymous11/21/06

need more

This is a great beginning very tantalizing, nice suspense on what the red envelope is. Needs a series.

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by bornagain06/05/07

The red Envelope

You have a suspenseful story it revolves around that stupid red envelope what was in it someone black mailing her or was it pictures or what?
Pat

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