All Comments on 'The New Slave Ch. 04'

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
i've adored......

this story from the beginning and still enjoying it...although "Master"??? that did surprise me very much but i do understand the need and desire of the moment...do wonder what her true Master will say to that little role play eh? thanks again as always for sharing i love your work no matter what title you submit it under...more please oh...more on the pirate story anytime soon? its been a very long time any plans for anything further on it? as always respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Thank you!

I have been dying to read more of the slaves and have been treated to another tasty chapter. Thank you Opels! I look forward to more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good job

I feel silly saying this, because this story's on Literotica after all, but it actually has really good character development. And that makes it sexier. I feel like the motives in this story are beyond just the carnal sex-drive. They're a bit more complex. But of course, you can't help having some of that complexity in a BDSM story. Nonetheless, I liked William. He was surprising. good job.

kitty007kitty007over 13 years ago

Excellent series! You're a very talented writer.

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