Don't know if I am Looking forward to chapter 2 as there is not enough here to get any idea what if anything is happening.
Will have to wait and see if there is a story here.
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Anonymous08/23/06
Taught?
A fitness instructor with a "taught" body. I wonder what she has been taught and who taught it to her.
English
Good build up...
Real characters – likable, too! Real feel to the story and a good build up. I'm interested to see where this goes.
So wheres the story
I read and suddenly it ended. Oh well. children have to play I guess
too short
why spoon feed us the chapters?
let us know if he cheated, or comes home feeling righteous and finds she cheated while he was gone.
Way to short for first chapter, no buildup
Don't know if I am Looking forward to chapter 2 as there is not enough here to get any idea what if anything is happening.
Will have to wait and see if there is a story here.
Taught?
A fitness instructor with a "taught" body. I wonder what she has been taught and who taught it to her.
idiot
what is your wife's name?
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