All Comments on 'Reunion in San Fransisco'

by Lesly Sloan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very subtle

Even though I am a hetero-male, I found this story to be very sweet and tender. I liked the development of the story that was very smooth and progressively more intimate.

I will look for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
This is a pleasant story posted before in 2001

Pleasant stroy about Lesbian begginings, since it was written so long ago I was expecting it to be a sequel, not a repeat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very hot story.

I liked it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

As a writer,i appreciate honest feedback. I hope you do as well. I found the story to be too.... technical and inexperienced. There wasn't much sensuality and it was a little porny. Try to expand your vocabulary, sensually and refrain from words and phrases like "crotch", "vagina," "cunt," "perinium," or pussy juices." There are so many other erotic words out there that would incite the feelings i think you're going for.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Sadly, this is a duplicate of the first part. Where’s the second part?

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