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A Christmas Surprise Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/10/07

good to go

let the mom join them to .

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by dliter03/22/10

Too disjointed

The storyline makes little sense, unless it is just for jerking off. Lots of potential but totally wasted.

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by Anonymous05/26/11

Slow Down

Although consencual adult incest is becoming somewhat acceptable nowdays, still one has a right to expect some guilt in both the parties if the story is to be human, and enjoyable. You went about it too fast. Do slow down a bit and use your imagination, to think what you would have felt if it had been your real father. If you do it right, it will give you a cue as to where to incert the guilt.

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by Anonymous06/15/11

Good job

i thought it was a great story and i really liked the ending

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