All Comments on 'Mr. Lucky'

I really enjoyed your story. You managed to suspend disbelief with this story.

You have an interesting since of humour, possibly sick. Keep writing because I definatley enjoy your stories. They have a completely different slant that anything else I have ever read.

Funny. Interesting. A good ride. Hard to say too much about this because it just grabs you at the beginning and doesn't let you go to the end.

Thanks

You Are one crazy mofo

I'm glad to read a story where the loser wins for a change. You are very creative, in a twisted sort of way. Still LMAO!!!

And I thought I had bad luck! whoa

Thanks, LYG, for making me belly laugh. Great story!

Need to make a sequel - they get married - more good and bad luck (e.g. Lana comes back) - put it into Loving Wives so it gets lots of traffic.

This is a really great story where Jim, finally, has things go his way in a big way.

YOu just keep getting better and better

I can only find the words of Thank you

I hope you didn't bite your tongue off while you had it jammed so far into your cheek! (That was where it ws jammed, right?)

Funny story - let's have some more.

Regards, DJ

Good story with some good humor, too.. Rather sounds like his luck changed dramatically for the best.. Wonder if she can cook?

May we all be as unlucky as Jim so that we too can get a Jill in our life.

Has Jim met Charlie? Loved it!!

I'm still laughing. Damned good yarn! The story of my life, except for the ending. His turned out pretty good. Keep up the fine work!

He did seem to have bad luck, although I do think he could of and should have been very wealthy after he sued the hospital for taking his nut! And now he has this crazy woman after him. Maybe his luck hasn't changed.

Thanks for the humorous tale.

Sounds like the narrator lost -- she married him and will soon rip his heart out in the divorce or when he catches her sleeping around on him.

Another one....

bill.....5sss

Poor guy just can't catch a break.

another good one - I like your writing style and believable dialogue and am a fan of the surprise near the end of your stories

I could be worse. She could have been normal. Just kidding.

Great tale. This could be in a different category because until the end it wasn't that funny. However, any place it would be put it's still an excellent tale.

It had an awful lot of tiny flaws and information withheld. Even as good as the overall story was, all I can award is 4 stars...and an apology.

But I have a question? Isn't he rich? When the football player punched him out didn't he file suit against the player and the school? That would have been worth a ton of money. But the bonanza would have been the hospital that cut off his nut. That would have given him retirement money. And that would have made him Mr. Lucky

How sad! **theatrically covers his eyes and faints**

“If a busload of naked midgets ran into the room, I wouldn't be surprised now.”

I fucking lost it when I read that line.

Haven't laughed so hard In years! Had to stop reading three or four times to stop laughing. Great writing! Jim is one lucky guy, I think?!

Exactly how many of those naked midgets were female? Just asking for a friend.

Not bad at all. Super cock!!!

How come he didn't she the hospital for removing his testicle?

I liked the story up to the point when they started pissing on each other, not my cup of tea, was a real turn off for me, you should have left that part out of the story.

What happened to Lana?.We know he never saw her after the hospital,but why not,she works with him,so did she quit her job?.

What a love story! They don't get any better than this. Excellent writing and a well crafted story.

I think it's hilarious

If the hospital mistakenly cuts off one of your balls, you just won the lottery! So he was lucky when he sued the hospital.

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I know this is repetitive, but Jim really should have sued the hospital on two cases, first for the loss of his testical, secondly for cocking up the surgery, leading to further complications. You also could have gotten the poor guy a testical prosthesis. That way at least you feel your nutsack having it's normal weight. Also, a sex partner will not sense that anything is missing, could be irritating otherwise.

So just some minor observations, liked the story, 5 stars.

Funny story and I loved it, thanks! 5 BIG FAT TWINKLING STARS!

How come he didn't sue the boyfriend or the hospital for removing his testical.The hospital cock up,would be worth thousands.

LMAO! Definitely in the right category. Another 5. Too bad tge author hasn't contributed anything morefor the oast decade and a half. I hope he is alive, well and writing for other venues and raking 8n the dough.

Okay, you got me! How can I resist a story that made me smile? Can’t! 5*s

That was pretty funny. Turned out well for him in the end. Works well with her story in Vegas. Frankendick lol!

I'm trying to figure out how much the hospital would have to pay if they removed the wrong guy's testicle. My guess is that it would be enough for him, his future children, grand-children and great-grand-children to retire.

So yeah, if he wasn't so stupid, he'd actually be lucky...

ok, by divorce his house will be gone... and parts od his retirement. Lucky guy, right?

You got alot of folks missing your storys.. myself included.. hope you and ur family are alrgt. Happily retired. 💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👌👌👌✌️✌️👁️👁️🍻🍕😁🙋🙋🙋

A weird story. And a weirder woman. But I agree with TheCommenter, how come he didn't sue the goddamn hospital for such a fucked up operation. With that money he could have retired in comfort.

Laughing at the naysayers. Read the sequel. He got really lucky. Frankendick. Hehe.