Mr. Lucky

this is Good Humor Man

I really enjoyed your story. You managed to suspend disbelief with this story.

Very different

You have an interesting since of humour, possibly sick. Keep writing because I definatley enjoy your stories. They have a completely different slant that anything else I have ever read.

Good Story

Funny. Interesting. A good ride. Hard to say too much about this because it just grabs you at the beginning and doesn't let you go to the end.

Thanks

Loved It

You Are one crazy mofo

Frankendick...Oh my God!

I'm glad to read a story where the loser wins for a change. You are very creative, in a twisted sort of way. Still LMAO!!!

WTF

And I thought I had bad luck! whoa

That was a riot!

Thanks, LYG, for making me belly laugh. Great story!

Funny story! Well done.

Need to make a sequel - they get married - more good and bad luck (e.g. Lana comes back) - put it into Loving Wives so it gets lots of traffic.

Nice story with a clear message

This is a really great story where Jim, finally, has things go his way in a big way.

Just to good to miss it is great fun

YOu just keep getting better and better
I can only find the words of Thank you

Nicely done ...

I hope you didn't bite your tongue off while you had it jammed so far into your cheek! (That was where it ws jammed, right?)

Funny story - let's have some more.

Regards, DJ

A good humorous story

Good story with some good humor, too.. Rather sounds like his luck changed dramatically for the best.. Wonder if she can cook?

Good Story

May we all be as unlucky as Jim so that we too can get a Jill in our life.

Hahahahaha!!!!

Has Jim met Charlie? Loved it!!

Good show!

I'm still laughing. Damned good yarn! The story of my life, except for the ending. His turned out pretty good. Keep up the fine work!

Nerd wars!

He did seem to have bad luck, although I do think he could of and should have been very wealthy after he sued the hospital for taking his nut! And now he has this crazy woman after him. Maybe his luck hasn't changed.

Thanks for the humorous tale.

Sounds like the narrator lost -- she married him and will soon rip his heart out in the divorce or when he catches her sleeping around on him.

Damn

Another one....


bill.....5sss

That's funny!

Poor guy just can't catch a break.

another good one - I like your writing style and believable dialogue and am a fan of the surprise near the end of your stories

Oh Well

I could be worse. She could have been normal. Just kidding.
Great tale. This could be in a different category because until the end it wasn't that funny. However, any place it would be put it's still an excellent tale.

Good Story, Even A Very Good Story, But...

It had an awful lot of tiny flaws and information withheld. Even as good as the overall story was, all I can award is 4 stars...and an apology.