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enjoyed this one also...
although i do wish they were a bit longer but that is a personal preference not anything against this story or writing...it was very good. keep up the very good work and look forward to reading on. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
I'm sorry there seems to be no more
I thought this story was off to a great start, but it's been since 2006 since you added the 2nd chapter. I'm assuming you probably lost interest in the story line. Just wanted to let you know that your beginning was very good. The dream sequence was great, the little details about Breanna feeling stifled in her mom's home, her yearning to be free to be who she really is -- all very good. I hope you might continue this story some day.
Oh my, what a tease!
This is definitely an intriguing start to an amazing story. I really hope you decide to finish it. I am completely memorized by it. Thanks for sharing it with us. ^_^
OMG
hey loved your story. hate that you left me wanting more. are you going to finish the story. I will really appreatiate it if you do.
Awesome.
Too bad there hasn't been another chapter for a few years. Would have loved to see what happened. The characters snagged my attention right away.
Continue?
I love this story so far, even without sex or erotic scenes...I love the idea that the girl doesn't automatically fall in love with the guy...i've read soooooo sooooooooo many stories where the girl doesn't even seem to resist being taken by him, and this is definitely a story i'll look forward to continuing...if the next part is added soon anyway..:)
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