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by MayhemLass05/30/06

poignant ...

this exquisite monologue on the emptiness which appears endless when a loved one is not there left me aching and almost tearful. Thank you.

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by Anonymous06/01/06

alone cuts

ever so deep in the one...I don't think one could express it any better...sighs..blue

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by LeBroz12/17/06

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Alone, incomplete, hollow
Begin to describe the separation of lovers.

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by duddle14601/15/07

longing

Now gone ~ sadly missed.

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