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Let Her.....

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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail05/30/06

unique

original and unique, I enjoyed your poem (~_~)

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by RhymeFairy05/31/06

Sunny side up ...

I see this bloom.
Watch as she cast
her over the moon
and sun.

I love the feel of this. Yes, very original. Your emotion in this write pulls the reader in and we feel it all.

Bravo !! Lovin it ~
More Please~

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