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by Willow Rain

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normal jeannormal jeanalmost 18 years ago
:)

sister witch, you and I both.

loved this poem, you state so easily what I plunder my mind for the right words to cry when I am all alone and wondering about him.

xoxox

g_g

YgraineYgrainealmost 18 years ago
Beautiful writing!

I enjoyed this poem very much. It flowed easily with an economy of language which identifies a competent poet. The subject matter made be feel sad and wistful - another strength to elist emotion with your words. I hope, one day, the boy will know you well enough not to draw back first and you will trust your inner feelings to allow someone to shield you against the world so you may remain open and not closed.

MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
wry, with just the right twist of sad ...

you are rapidly turning into a new favourite - your ability to manipulate and twist masterful - you have just the right balance of wryness and pathos in this ... excellent!

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowalmost 18 years ago
Simple, Sweet Sad

Music box simple and universal. Who hasn't been there, in some sense? Thank you.

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