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A woman’s welcome

byWillow Rain©
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by RhymeFairy05/31/06

Awesome ~!!

Dreamy, sweet, and so poignant. You pull
us into your restful love, and make the sandman
slumber in his wake ... Great imagery and write.
Thinking I shall have to read more and more
of your poetry. * smiles.
Asking myself, what man could resist this kind
of love. Just so real, caring aww sheezz..
ya get the point, love this one gurl ~

More and more please~ grins*

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by MayhemLass05/31/06

beautiful!

an epic ,medieval feel to this that is quite entrancing ...

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by saw_man105/31/06

My first image

was that of a knight home from battle but then realized that the descriptions could easily be a metaphor for a businessman coming home, briefcase in hand. Wonderful imagry.

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by The Mystery Valiant06/02/06

Excellent!

I can't really say just what it is that makes your poem stand out. But it is marked! It is ribboned! Marvelously cloying! I feel a kind of warmth and soul in those words and their finite structure. I measure a blessing in those elegant phrases and Stanzas! Absolutely tremendous!

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by Anonymous06/29/06

boring boring borrring

read the title

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by LeBroz10/29/06

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The strength of a woman is always there
Offering comfort to weary souls...

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by duddle14601/07/07

restful

Let your homecoming be quiet and restful ~ Sleep - then awaken refreshed.

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