I love the concept the good girl, but really a "bad" girl idea I can't wait until they have sex because Marcus is going to be so surprised.
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Anonymous06/05/06
Great
I can't wait to read more. Everytime I read one of your stories I'm left longing for more. I'm so happy that you updated. I hope that Marcus and Octavia can have something more than a one-night stand.
KC
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Anonymous06/05/06
You Are A Wonderful Writter
You are a great writter!!! I love all of your stories!! Get thee self to a publisher!!!!!
Good Lord! The kissing is just the appetizer. Now it's time for the main course. I'm telling you, Angel. The sexual tension between those two is hot and if they don't hit the sack soon, I think they will exploded and so will I. lol. Great post and I hope to see another installment from you soon!
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Anonymous06/26/06
Thirsty!
I that it? And just where is chapter 4????
I'm very thirsty, so please quench my thirst with a new installment of this beautiful story.
Don't leave me hanging now!
Hurry up!
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Anonymous07/05/06
Wow...
Wow, angelicsounds, you did it again to me. Left me wanting and wishing the next chapter was here.
Marcus is grown ass smokin' hot......owwwwwwwwwwww boo...the kind of heat he's generating is the stuff!! A more worldly woman could properly channel that, but then would he be interested? The challenge is her innocence and lack of sophistication...right?
English
Amazing...
I love the concept the good girl, but really a "bad" girl idea I can't wait until they have sex because Marcus is going to be so surprised.
Great
I can't wait to read more. Everytime I read one of your stories I'm left longing for more. I'm so happy that you updated. I hope that Marcus and Octavia can have something more than a one-night stand.
KC
You Are A Wonderful Writter
You are a great writter!!! I love all of your stories!! Get thee self to a publisher!!!!!
great story
I cannot wait for the next installment.
Damn! That's hot!
Thank you so much!!!! Finally we are getting somewhere. Please tell me you will be writing more on these two.....it just can't end like this.
Where's My Fan?
Good Lord! The kissing is just the appetizer. Now it's time for the main course. I'm telling you, Angel. The sexual tension between those two is hot and if they don't hit the sack soon, I think they will exploded and so will I. lol. Great post and I hope to see another installment from you soon!
Thirsty!
I that it? And just where is chapter 4????
I'm very thirsty, so please quench my thirst with a new installment of this beautiful story.
Don't leave me hanging now!
Hurry up!
Wow...
Wow, angelicsounds, you did it again to me. Left me wanting and wishing the next chapter was here.
And Again........
you got it right. Hope the next chapter comes out soon. Keep writing, you got the touch.
Update?
Loving the story!
oh i ...
Oh i love it. yes. Romantic interracial. Very hot & sexy.
Really...really...........really liked this
Marcus is grown ass smokin' hot......owwwwwwwwwwww boo...the kind of heat he's generating is the stuff!! A more worldly woman could properly channel that, but then would he be interested? The challenge is her innocence and lack of sophistication...right?
Very interesting...
...kisses to be sure. I'm loving the buildup and getting to see their thoughts.
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