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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust06/02/06

A

well crafted piece of solid poetry. The metaphor here is subtle and unfolds neatly.

Sublime stuff

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by Tzara06/02/06

I really like this one, Boo.

It is simple, in keeping with the title, but not over simple. Elegant, I think is how I would describe it.

The one suggestion I might make is on the punctuation. It seems to be missing some commas and perhaps a period. That may just be me being anal, though, or how I am reading it.

Really well done.

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by Anonymous06/04/06

Agree

with Tzara, in need of some punctuation in 2nd stanza. Agree w /Tzara about the rest also. Very tight, nice use of words, no varnish.

MNS

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by LeBroz10/28/06

~~

Which goes to show
All of art is subjective...

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by duddle14601/03/07

ode to wood.

Lamenting the life of a tree cut short ~ a shelf is made ~ Art?

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by normal jean05/16/10

loved it!

your poetry is NEVER a disappointment. luv ya, j

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by njoyjade11/18/12

A sculptor of words

is truly an art form.

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by normal jean05/15/14

I miss you Boo

and your take on simple things. So often poetry is made to seem lofty, like it wasn't meant for regular people like us. But your poetry is and always was real and beautiful, like you. I hope Heaven suits you Dear Lady.

~julie

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