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Mending the Rend

byLil Vixen©
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by Anonymous06/07/06

sweet, well written but too short

while this was sweet, and well written, it was too short.

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by Anonymous06/07/06

ok, this was a little short for the first chapter

but I did not see anything to show continued.

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