All Comments on 'Bishop Ch. 01'

Pleasantly surprised, well written and it has actually managed to peak my interest. I do hope you will have more coming?

It has a plot, suspense, a villain, a hero, victims, a combination of magic and a supposed secret FBI unit to deal with magic, as well as fascinating characters and psychic links. Very good, I say. This one deserves a 100, and will get it from me. I look forward to the sequels. The sexual contact is great, albeit limited.

I'm mentioning it on the AH Review Thread.

Love it! Keep it coming!

This is great! What happens next? I've never read a story quite like this before, it's in interesting mix.

The back-story for this piece could be used either fro a TV show (a la "Grimm") or asa movie plot (kind of like an adult "Harry Potter")