All Comments on 'Sherry's New Job Ch. 01'

Not only is it a yawner, you didn't even use it to develop the characters.

i dont usually post negative comments. But from any standpoint, this is weak. So short as to show zero imagination, 1000000 year old storyline, so what a guy is gonna use a pill to rape his wife? why bother?

lets not forget this is a woman he gave vows with and bore his child, he is now, due to lack of sex, going to chemically induce her into a state of mindlessness and rape her. nice guy, great friend too. ok so the wife could use councelling but jeez. no, sorry the wife is not evil enough to deserve chem rape. i think the writer has issues

on the writer let them develop there tale, the important point so far is that he has established a credible reason behind the actions, weve all been there our partner being an tight arsehole with the sex. Lets see how this one copes with the consiquenses.

stuff the neg letters lets see where you go with it so far it looks promising

Think I'll just take a little na.........

Finish the damn thing. You just got started.

get on with it allready.