Vibrations

Wow

one of the better stories I've read , Great !!!!!

more

this story needs to keep going

nice

amazing. great setting, realistic and skillfully written.

Thoroughly Exciting!!

You have an amazing sense of humour.
Its the first time ever that I laughed as hard as I came, reading a story!

I'm looking forward to lots more such fantastic stories from you. Keep up the good work.

what happened?

why have you stopped writing..you should write more parts of this story...this is hot

OMG!!!!

You need to keep writing incest stories this is one of the best stories here, hey check out "Persuading Shy Mom to Pose by byoptocynic©" for inspiration and moreeeee stories please...
(and part2 of this one of course)

fantastic

more please tell us what happens next

Wow

Got my pussy dripping wet...I need more pleaseeee write moreee..so sexy that they accidentally fucked..getting horny again just thinking about it!!!

nice

THE SIS NEED A VIBRATION TOO ALSO MOMMIE SHOULD BE PREGO

good one

good one well sculpted and executed

helloooo

this is my FAVORITE story (: like of all stories, ever. it's just awesome. I think the reason i love so much is because it was actually, completely accidental. it wasnt until it was happening that the mom started to enjoy it.

Chuffed

:) Chuffed you enjoyed it so much!

Super hot!

Although not without a chance to grow, but I loved hot quickly the story got reactor hot! I have a few points to critic but your awesome score tells me the majority of people would change a thing on this one:
1) I got very worried that the mom was going to become paralyzed for a second.
There was a point where she gets hurt from the second quake that scared me.
2) The Father/Husband was out of town half way through.
Why not use that to fertilize the mom's scenario from the beginning with say some hot build up. (She could have been masturbating heavily ever since her husband left to enhance her side of the sexual hunger. Maybe she mentions that she is kind of laud in climax and hope she hasn't bothered he kids with her 'self help'
3) Maybe add that the son was also masturbating heavily.
He could have been venting sexual frustration in the shower because his mom was causing too many hard-ons with her recent laud masturbation.
I hope this reads more like a wish list and less of a bitch list because your writing is hot! I like your desire to explain the reason scenarios but wish for more emotions and descriptions of sexual turmoil and lustful need in the characters! I love sexual tension and reluctance to lust with eventual submission! HOT! You have serious skills! Please keep these stories coming! and us too! ;-)

awesome work

I loved your work it has the feel of a great hentai and captures the essence of hotness

Another after sock

This a great story like my four time reading, but need more. Like Sophie saiding it was the hottest she ever saw. I like to see mom said I know you should try it youself you like it also.

Fucking idiot !!!

Commenter below AND the writer. 1 !

Anonini

Luv mom-son incest stories! Especially liked the daughter finding out and being charged by it. Please continue and toss some mother-daughter sex in for good measure!

WOW WHAT A RIDE

This is one of the best stories of read so far. I hope you come up with ch.2 soon

Earthquakes

Okay, so I know these "thrown together" stories are fun, & some of them manage to pull off hot, which parts of your's does, but in reading this again I just can't get past the crazy earthquake thing. The writer here treats them as if they are a tornado or another similar natural disaster. Having truly actually grown up in earthquake country (& been through 'the big one' in '89), I can tell you earthquakes just happen. People stand in doorways, stay away from windows or anything that might fall on them. In a really big quake you actually fill all the bathtubs & sinks with water in case it gets shut off later. Usually when an earthquake happens everyone asks each other if the other person felt it, tries to guess what it was on the richter scale, picks anything up that fell down & go about their business. Your writing is fun but even with trying for a suspension of disbelief, I just need a little more plausibility. Next time pick a natural disaster you know, or you can use writers forum or an editor.
SF Bay Girl
(btw I'm not voting b/c me being nit-picky about my where I grew up has nothing to do with your writing ability & I'd never sabatoge someone's score like that)

Stupid

This is an extremely stupid story

OMG!!

Wow!... seething with lust and "forbidden" debauchery... 5-star!!
While (as stated) .."So many incalculably small odds" as to render this a fantasy excursion of epic proportions... still a deliciously fresh approach. Hope you've got more up your sleeve ...or oozing from your pen...

Funny, Funny, Funny!

That has got to be the funniest story I have read in a long time. So the facts may not have been accurate, but as a piece of fiction anything goes, Right? There is a name for that but I'm not sure what it is called; 'Literary License' or something like that.

Definitely keep on writing. I'll look forward to more hysterical laughter.

As the saying goes, "Thanks, I needed that!". ;-)

Envious daughter

It would make for a great follow up, that the envious daughter should seek out her brother's services to relieve the itch she now feels.

Funny

The best funny story I have read, I wish I had some accidents like that, hard as rock now.

candy

similar to the ending of the terry southern classic "candy" where candy and her dad are thrown together during a storm. check it out, it's very funny and similar to this situation.

It's great story!

Make more chapters, please!
May Mom get pregnant, and sis join them and also get pregnant! )))

"Vibrations:" - James and Unnamed Mom - (Son and Mother)

Does the movie, "Ther Perfect Storm", ring a bell to anyone?

Though the story has two serious subject matters--the earthquake itself, and the very pleasing carnal, incestual sexual consummation of a mother and son!!

The story as it actually is detailed is most likely not possible, however one cannot say with certainty that the totality of the situation is impossible. For James and his mutually satisfied mother the impossible did happen. To me, as an avid lover of romantically fulfilling carnal incestual literature, I am most thrilled it happened, in the mind of our illusturious writer/author.

The story has a titillating and humorous bent to it throughout; and even some suspense that Sophie (and her "torch") would too-soon discover her sibling and her mother in the throes of the most passionate, though totally unexpected, fuck of their lives! Awesome in every aspect.

Though, we as only the readers of this fabulous story will never know the future of these story character's, we as reader's can use our vivid imaginations to put our own selfish ending to the story. My wish is that (unnamed) mother decides to continue their "perfect storm" affair, and that she has now already been impregnated with her's and her son's child!!!

A wonderful story that paints a sexy picture

It would be a crime to leave this story as an accidental one of . The perfect addition to this story is that this doesn't remain in the bathroom , but continues as James ,mother and sister enter into a life long love triangle with children to both . Don't leave the story hanging unfinished , it's far too good not to have a ending .

Mind blown

Hats off to u the author.
Exciting, intense, thrilling.

love it

Very Hot,and Sexy but also Funny at the same time....hope to see a part II

Guess the earthquake wasn't the only thing that made the earth move for her and a new meaning to fertilizing the garden. Was a hilarious story.

I guess you expect us to believe and accept

the supposed innocence of the accidental intimacies?

ya sure. do you think mom would accept it as accidental if it had been the brother and sister, and she was the one who turned on the torch?

I didn't think so. or,

if there is any lingering doubt, I have an often sold bridge for sale.

Oh the coincidence

Similar but on a boat test drivr..on a rough channel.
Using the portapot during a low gale wind , my friends
Sister was lifted off the johnny seat and suspended mid
air as the boat dropped between waves.the cutty door
Snapped open, sucked both my legs down the three steps
Legs following at neck break velocity. The wave
hit the port bow, tossing our vessel about following
A short midair stop. Physics played a part slammimg
My battered torso to the floor and I layed back down
Toward the head as the poor gal, bare bottom, splashed
Of blue, landed square on my mid and nearly crush the
Manhood to death..the rest was history.
So the story goes..yes its possible

Funny and absurd

I voted you a 3/5 for a funny version of these mother/son accidental-ride stories. It was far hotter than some other car/bus ride ones and, if you'd only made it more expanded by not abandoning it, I'd consider it a pretty good start to a rollicking good romp. I normally hate group/swinging family romance fantasies but, in this kind of absurd/fun fantasy, why not have the sister sample them both and go full blast into the mother's unplanned pregnancy then lactation too later on.

I don't mind how unrealistic the quake was, intergalactic space lasers wouldn't make any sound either but I paid to watch Star Wars anyway, back in the day. Inaccuracy is only insulting to the reader if you were seriously trying to make us believe this really happened. I get insulted when a realistic couple start out normally then flip into being porno actors at the drop of mom's bikini top. This submission was fine, only it should have continued on a couple more pages. Thanks for the read.

Amazing!

I love it! Makes me cum every time. Would love a sequel. The little sister needs to get railed.

Truly excellent

The last scene exquisite, thank you for the read (spike)

Vibrations

It is. A very good piece of writing but I. Think it shouldn't end there.

whatabath

I really liked this story. It was written in such a way that I could feel the earth shake their bathroom.
This almost happened to me but there was no earthquake. I was in the bathroom and slipped on the rug and after grabbing whatever I could I fell into the bathtub backwards, on my ass. The bad news was that I was alone and sex was not on my mind,
Most of the other stories have the mother and son wanting each other and after a day or two finally do it. All the while complaining that mothers and sons should not be fucking each other.
Most people would not believe that such a thing could happen but it can.
We see news clips where people go sliding all over the room, not being able to stand and I'm sure fall over each other.
The author was well versed on quake activity and was great in making the son grab anything he could which in this case turned out to be his mother's nightgown so now we can see why their both naked. Thanks

continue

this is a plea to the author to return to writing the events that ensue after the bathroom scene.

Awesome

I thought that this story was amazing I came immediately after the mum came. I would love to read a sequel and I only wish I could have a similar experience. 11/10

Unbelievably hot!

By all means please carry on with this story.

More

I would love to see more of this. It's extremely well-written and the story is hot. I can't help but think a family orgy is next. I mean Sophie seemed to enjoy watching enough that she might want to join in.
Thank you for sharing! It's really is awesome.

This story is awesome! I would love to see what happens next (and maybe Sophie joins in?).

definitely needs additional chapters, with sister joining in the fun.

Best Part

Her eyes instantly took in the image of her mother, spine arched and head back as her brothers cock exploded inside of me, coating my hole with his thick cum. My feverish eyes held my daughters gaze apologetically as, unable to prevent my climax, my mouth opened and a gasp of ecstatic pleasure purred in my throat.

Something about her looking her daughter in the eyes when she cums almost pushes me to come.

Another Great Story

One of the best of the mother-son category stories on Literotica. Of course every story is complete as written; but....
The possibilities are nearly limitless for a Chapter 2 or at least an Epilogue.
What happens between mom & James? How does their relationship change? Does hubby's continued absence foment further dalliance? Are there "aftershocks" lurking beneath their feet?
What happens with mom & Sophie? James & Sophie?
What would be the consequences of the hubby returning? Will Sophie keep her confidence?
My, Oh My!

Please take up the quill again!

A very hot, and sticky situation.

Great things can come out of disasters. Like a new special relationship. As everyone surveyed the damage, James's room was all but destroyed, while his parent's and Sophie's were pretty much still intact. It was decided since his parents had a king size bed, he'd sleep in his mom's room that night, and Sophie would sleep in hers. Sophie awakened that night to what sounded like her mom in pain. As she quietly listened she realized it wasn't pain, but pleasure! James and her mother were fucking! As she continued to listen, her mom started to get a little louder, things became a little more audible. Oh James, that feels so good, you seem to know just what to do to me. Your cock is so much bigger than your dad's, I just love it. Oh mom, I never knew it could feel this good. You are so hot, and sexy, fucking you is like a dream come true. Oh James! Oh James! A little harder baby! Oh yes! Oh yes honey! Just like that! Oh mom! I don't know how much longer I can hold out! Don't worry baby, I'm almost there now! Oh yes! Oh yes! Oh honey! Oh James! Oh James! Oh God! Oh Baby! Oh yes! Yes! Yes! Oh honey! Oh honey! I'm coming baby! Oh honey! Oh honey! Oh mom! Here I cum mom! Oh god! Oh god! Oh yes mom! Sophie couldn't believe what she was hearing. She also didn't realized at first that she was playing with her clit. Her brother and mother sounded so hot as they fucked! She started working her clit even harder as she could hear James and her mom still moaning from their orgasms. Sophie was as horny as she'd ever been as she worked her fingers even faster as she felt her orgasm approaching. Suddenly she was thinking of her brother James, and he was fucking her. She imagined his shaft working it's way in, and out of her hungry pussy. His body above hers as he drove into her harder and faster. Her breathing began to get faster and faster, as her fingers were now a blur over her pleasure center. James and his mom had quieted down by now, but were still both breathing harder than normal. They suddenly heard some noise, a rustling coming from Sophie's room. They listened more carefully and they could hear Sophie saying something. Was she having a dream, or a nightmare they wondered? Suddenly they could hear her very clearly. Oh yes! Oh god James! Fuck me! Fuck me hard! Oh yes! Oh yes James! You're so big! Your so hard! Oh fuck! Oh James! Oh yes! Harder James! Oh yes! Oh yes! I'm coming James! Oh god! Oh god, Oh god!

excellent !

I've no idea of the actual elapsed time for this story.. but.. it was EXCELLENT !

1* !!

Pile of steaming , mindless and talentless garbage !

sexy

I came so hard

I missgetting fucked