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Can I ask?
How can one be so intoxicatingly brilliant?
Oh my ...
I am not just saying this. I have goosebumps. I loved this. Spoke to me so softly, think the image did that, but what a poem to kick in and whisper .. I am speechless. Really have no clue what to say but this has touched me, and is just beautiful.
You have to submit this somewhere ... Awesome ~
Astounding! I rarely read the poems here,
but a previous comment drew me to this one. I don't think that I have ever read a poem that was put together so well. You could start at any line and read in any order and it still affects you. Thank you.
lindiana, vampiredust and sherlock40...
a way way belated thank you to you each for your most generous comments! My apologies for poor form! sherlock40, I hope you'll visit New Poems more often. There's no shortage of excellent poetry!
far & away.
I liked the theme of the 'past being a far off country.' The stated aim is to persevere ~ no small thing. Lovely and enchanting.
Congrats...
....late, I know, on winning the illustrated poem for June 2006. I notice you have not shown any new work since November 2006, I hope you do again soon.
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Oh, I don't know about you but I love my memories of the wasted partying years. Come to think of it, they weren't wasted ~ I was. And I loved every minute and glad to have had them.
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