All Comments on 'wrestling passion'

There is a good poem at the core of this. You've created a good setup for the reader but your language can be tightened further; the line 'it takes two to tango' is cliched, for example.

O my god! This is a work of art! Your cliches are so wonderful. Really, you should quit your day job and spend it writing poetry because you are that good!

Cute. I have an image of wrestling with a board and looking for a knot hole. It might have something to do with my trying to revitalize my passion for Lustful Leeves, ya reckon? *grin* Great poem, Art. ~Minx

When you are 'hammering to get nailed,' there are no losers.