All Comments on 'Sneltrein'

by Tzara

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A spot of time

You've captured a moment in time. Your imagery is deft, esp

'a cleft-chinned

porcelain doll.'

which was my favourite here. It makes me want to go to Holland.

An excellent piece of pure poetry.

J.DoeJ.Doealmost 18 years ago
A fresh slice of poetry

Thank you.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
mentioned

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Reading this

makes me prone to puns, like "cutting the cheese". As a little "slice" of life, I like it, structure, word play, etc.

MNS

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