by Tzara
You've captured a moment in time. Your imagery is deft, esp
'a cleft-chinned
porcelain doll.'
which was my favourite here. It makes me want to go to Holland.
An excellent piece of pure poetry.
this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the literary journey (~_~)
makes me prone to puns, like "cutting the cheese". As a little "slice" of life, I like it, structure, word play, etc.
MNS