before.....excellent, believeable and much more real to life than so many other bdsm stories...thank you for sharing it with us respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Hmm nice to see Your story here. Hope You keep writing.
Very intense and real, i could feel it as if.... plz write more Alan! girldreams
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as i said ......
before.....excellent, believeable and much more real to life than so many other bdsm stories...thank you for sharing it with us respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Congrats
Hmm nice to see Your story here. Hope You keep writing.
hmmm again ..... wow :)
Very intense and real, i could feel it as if.... plz write more Alan! girldreams
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