Finding Love

Decent writer...but a little rushed...

This story seems a bit rushed and the story line seems a bit rushed. I think you should take more time to develop the story in the next chapter...

Looking for more from you

The talent is truly there! I will be looking for more from you...hopefully more and longer chapters on this storyline.

Good but Cliched Beginning

Is there a point to his being not just rich but super-rich? That seems to point the story in a Harlequin direction. Don't get me wrong; good beginning but you want to avoid being too predictable. I am interested in reading what happens next!

Nice start

I'm always on the lookout for good wm/bf stories. Hoping you develop this more.

Great Start!

I can't wait to see how the rest of it developes!!!! Good Job!!!

Good Writing

I really liked this beginning. I can't wait to read more.

KC

Enthralling!!!

grammar only matters to those without imagination and sensibility...I have to say that this is one of the most enthralling stories I've read in a very long time. I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting.

Keep going with what may become a great story

It is so easy for people to leave critical comments yet most of them do not write themselves. I like the beginning of this story and I would encourage you to continue with it.

Great story

I look forward to the sequel and hope that they get to meet again and begin a new relationship.

you so have to finish this!

more, more, more...

Great!

I love stories about BW/WM. Keep it cummin'!!! :-)

and...............

Where's the rest of the story. Don't keep me on edge. Finish it soon.

THAT'S IT!!!!

WTF! Where is rest of the story? Why did you stop? When are you going to finish it?
darkfaer

i love it

& cant wait to read the finish

WHEN ARE COMING BACK TO FINISH.

I LOVE THIS STORY. I WILL CONTINUE TO WAIT PATIENTLY FOR YOU TO COMPLETE THIS STORY. THIS STORY HAS VERY GOOD POTENTIAL. I LOVE HOW YOU TOLD CHRIS STORY AND THE LOVE HE WAS LOOKING FOR SINCE HIS DIVORCE FROM HIS GOLDDIGGING EX-WIFE. NADIA IS THE WOMAN FOR HIM. THOSE TWO HAVE MORE IN COMMON THAN THEY REALIZE. I'M BEGGING TO PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY.

NOOOOOO!!!!!!! Don't stop here!!!

I was just getting into!! please please PLEASE write more!!!!!!

MORE!!!!!!!

YOU NEED WRITE MORE, ASAPPPP!!!!!!!!!

Good Start

The characters have been given life and the stage is set. Now all you gotta do is add a little spice and build the tension.

More please...

I was just getting into the story. Please tell me you will submit more chapters. :-)

R u serious where is the rest??? C'mon, more chapters..

Can you please finish this story

This was the sugady!!!

More please!!