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I don't tend to comment much, but I thought this was rather good! Left it on a cliffhanger too...argh! You have a great writing style and build up the tension nicely. I'll keep an eye out for more!
LTS xx
Where's chapter two!
This story is well written, though it seems unfinished!!!
please
You're an exceptional writer and I would really love to read more of this particular one if it has a continuation
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