All Comments on 'writing graciously on angry paper'

without a doubt a raging wild write! One of the best i have read from you! sooo many vivid use of word pics..this was a feast for the eyes! every line excited me!!! im putting this to my favs!

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

...poem I have ever read from you, MET. and it's not even close.

there are problems i see with it, but they are not important. what i think is important is that you have broken your back to write real poetry, and move away from the silliness. i used to think you would never even try to improve. reading this, i can see i was wrong about that.

so there is no point in pointing out things i don't like or things to improve. the improvement shown in this poem over your previos work is dramatic, and i applaud you for the the work you put into this. i know it was not easy.

i gave it a 5, and i never ever vote on a poem anymore. is it a 5? . . . no . . . but it's a 4, and that's 2 points higher than i thought any other poem of yours should get. i did it just to show you how much i think of your effort here.

This poem made use of many interesting images such as "mere dust devils in tornado training" and "albino creature, its wings slapping the table" and was richer than most of the poems I read here. This gets an A!

somewhat with RM...is one of your finest writes this verse

Tattooing saw dust and glue,

branding this albino creature, being my favorite the hidden meanings behind the words are surfing just below the emotive thoughts...great pen...hugz blue

Every image was a moment in time with the breathless anticipation of more to come. All of us face the albino pages, you just know how to paint with words the beauty of the human emotions.

LB

and drag your reader along with you ... excellent

Very poetic title and much better poem than your usual poetry. Like R.M., I see "problems" with the poem, but if you keep writing like this (and you're willing to learn) you'll eventually improve enough to come back and confidently edit this piece. :)

I agree with others here; this is leaps and bounds ahead of most of your other poetry. I suppose that's something of a backhanded compliment, though. How about this, then: Excellent write!

especially this line--

I swirled in the literary sand box of white

good work, getting better ;)

maria

i really enjoyed this poem! while it's non-erotic in context, and i think really captures the struggle of writing, the imagery and language seemed very erotic to me (or maybe that's just how my mind works). it was a pleasure to read.

This is the best work of yours that I have read so far. I know it is not easy dealing with that angry paper.