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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail06/11/06

I see promise

scratch the errors and I think this is a good poem. I can see that time went into its lay out and the point of the poem obvious, perhaps when it was pasted it jumbled together but basically I enjoyed this poem.

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by Amyfriend01/29/07

Promising poem..

but the typo's distract from the flow

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