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Goodbye, Love Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by 06/12/06

Your story has been

mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

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by Aurora Black06/12/06

Great Start!

It reminded me of those TV shows/movies that feature someone wrestling with their conscience, with the Angel on one shoulder and the Devil on the other. Great job, Jett!

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by Darkniciad06/13/06

You know I like it

Nice twist on the angel and devil on the shoulder, with a lot of potential.

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by neonlyte06/16/06

Interesting start

Be sure to look up the second chapter, I'd like to see where you go with this piece.

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