All Comments on 'Co-worker Fantasies'

You can build up the tension between the characters and play it out....do you have an idea on where you want the story to go?

The account of the sexual encounter in the woods is superb, but the premise needs a lot of, um, fleshing out. Both characters are married, but they do each other with wild abandon? At least you had an attraction build up between them over time rather than just throwing them together in a broom closet after one shared glance at the water cooler, but I'm dubious that this would happen at all, particularly if he is "happily married." Are he and his wife having problems? What about Laney and her husband? What would motivate the two to commit adultery so casually? Just doesn't seem like it would be that uncomplicated.

Lotta backstory to be back-filled, IMO. That's where this saga should go next.

please write more. tell me about how you have to suck her tits so her breast milk wont leak out at work.