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I loved it
Pushed all my buttons . . . first time lesbian experience, truth or dare . . . and a little masturbation!
Excellent!
I love first time lesbian stories, this one was very good.. Keep writing please!
Good, but rushed pacing
This started out SO very good! You introduced the characters, established their relationship, built up a curiosity, but once we got to their second kiss all hell broke loose. Okay, that can be exciting too, but it was so teasingly paced that I wanted to see more develop before yhey just went "okay, lets be lesbian lovers now" without hesitation.
Great!
Very well done. good pace and a short ending. Can't wait to see more from you.
Thanks
BORING, WHY BOTHER PRINTING THIS ONE?
boring. no plot, no seduction, totally un realistic. stories getting worse not better. get the hook. I mean really, who finds this interesting?
Reminds me of my first time...
Except that we weren't in the woods in a tent. Very hot. Makes me wanna call my g/f. Good job!
I love these jerks who cry something like "BORING"
who obviously can't even write an intelligent comment let alone a real story.
I'm sure many a pair of girls have started out in a similar way-I know that I did
Only difference it at my grandma's and my girlfriend was keeping me company for the week
UNLIKE MARYLYN...
...I do NOT love arseholes like Boring, but detest their stupidity, which is crowned by an apparent belief in their qualification to comment on what they clearly have not understood. The height of folly: the supreme arrogance of the sublimely ignorant. That wanker asks who finds this interesting; he only has to read the other comments and the scores awarded to get his answer, but he is too mentally lazy to bother with other people's opinions, and being intellectually bankrupt he no doubt has no respect for other people's right to have differing preferences.
Lacey, keep writing, and count me amongst those who found the story delightful.
So hot!
Lace, wow. Ok, so I didn't read in the order you asked... but am VERY glad to have read this one!
You are SO getting your own favorites folder!
(BTW, Boring is an idiot. This was steamy!)
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