Mm I can feel how erotic it would have been to have these young black men fuck me too
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Anonymous07/11/06
Good Jack off story
It worked for me!
by
Anonymous07/14/06
raw and and uncompromising
Your 'she's at the mercy of a bunch of guys' stories really turn me on!
by
Anonymous06/29/08
floss69
These young lads had an interesting day at the office wouldn't you say!!
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Anonymous08/20/08
Good, but very steriotypical
The story was, for the most part, well written, albeit rather rough in the area of grammar. That aside, it seems to me that all stories involving black people tend to be where the black men always utterly dominate the woman. I think that someone who could challenge that norm would do very well, and I think that as a writer, you would be capable. As for my rating, I never give anyone a 100, but I would say that your's ranked a solid 90. Congratulations, and keep up the good work.
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Anonymous07/24/09
was this rape or consent
why is it that ,these stories are always about black guys just taking the white women,for sure white women are not that east to just pick up in parks and fuck five or six guys. i found nothing even close to being real in this store. sorry i have read better. no plot what so ever
i would have loved it myself!
Mm I can feel how erotic it would have been to have these young black men fuck me too
Good Jack off story
It worked for me!
raw and and uncompromising
Your 'she's at the mercy of a bunch of guys' stories really turn me on!
floss69
These young lads had an interesting day at the office wouldn't you say!!
Good, but very steriotypical
The story was, for the most part, well written, albeit rather rough in the area of grammar. That aside, it seems to me that all stories involving black people tend to be where the black men always utterly dominate the woman. I think that someone who could challenge that norm would do very well, and I think that as a writer, you would be capable. As for my rating, I never give anyone a 100, but I would say that your's ranked a solid 90. Congratulations, and keep up the good work.
was this rape or consent
why is it that ,these stories are always about black guys just taking the white women,for sure white women are not that east to just pick up in parks and fuck five or six guys. i found nothing even close to being real in this store. sorry i have read better. no plot what so ever
well done
great wank story.RJB
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