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What happened ?
What happened to the usual run of the mill creampie-eating husband stories ?
Normally I just skip any story written by you as I am not into the slut wife accepting husband type of stories but this story was actually very good. I'm not sorry I clicked on it by mistake and will keep a eye out for more
Good Job
I loved the way the story turned out .I thought it was going to be a story about you watching as your wife fucked other guys and get turned on.I like the way the story went. Surprise at the end whic was good.
Aw Hell
It doesn't make much dirrerence what kind of stories you write. You write them well and that's what counts.
Well Done
I enjoyed reading this, it was very well done. Thanks for a good read.
Very nice.
This story was a very nice surprise. I enjoyed it a great deal. I love when the husband man's up and doesn't take his wife's shit. Good job.
Surprisingly good
Considering there was in essence no sexual description. Possibly the only story on this site that I have enjoyed for something other than arousal. Good work.
nice
a very nice story this one supprised me on the ending liked it
Great story Bob!
Unlike some of the other readers I wasn't surprised. All of your stories are well written. I don't always like your story line but that doesn't mean the writing isn't great.
Just Plain Be what you want and keep writing!
Regards, DJ
HOLY CRAP!!
Two decent stories in a row?
My God that's one of the signs of the "apocalypse". I mean there are others, but JPB writing two stories without Creampie husbands and giving them some backbones? Yep one of the signs.
Good storie JPB. Most of the time I give up on you, but every once in awhile I take a chance and don't feel bad I did.
>=)
-Risq
LOL
You need to write more stories like this. LOVED IT!!
Very good
A very good story indeed. Don't always like your stories but I do always read them. Nicely done.
Very good read
Loved how his foul little mind work! A bit dark and warm at the same time.
Neat job JPB!
I agree with Dynamite Jack...
The writing is consistently good, and the content is normally palatable to the open-minded.
Your stories are a daily pick-me-up, well almost daily.
My best regards
Helluva Story
Helluva story Bob. Great story line.
Liked It
Nice twist with just a bit of humor.
Keep Writing
Bob
Keep Up the Good Writing!
As you wrote in your open letter (see http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=4 31176) we can expect a variety of different stories. This story is one I enjoyed although Alma's behavior was extreme.
Thanks for writing!
SleeplessinMD
What have we here
So, a story from you that is a little romantic and a little sweet. You're not getting soft in your old age are you Bob?
I enjoyed it. Thank you.
Great addition of humor and justice
Really enjoyed the story even though there wasn't a ton of sex. Would love to see a part 2 where we learn more details about how she got him back, and then how they started into swinging afterwards.
great fun!
Thank you for paying more attention to us - simple, boring normal readers. It was hilarious!
Extreme Makeover Swan
An original story. That's worth 100 right there. And well-written to boot!
Did anything like this ever happen to one of the real life Swans or Extreme Make over people?
Great Story, Bob
About your strongest of the "slut wife" stories - well done - great fantasy. I liked the ending. Could almost use an epilogue - I could see him knocking her up about 4 or 5 times - a brood of young'uns to take care of would be good for her!
This one works for me!
Some of your stuff I like, and some I don't. This is one of your better stories. The characters are believeable, likeable, and consistent. The plot isn't TOO outlandish and the ending ties up all the loose ends. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. When I read a JustPlainBob story, whether I end up liking the story or not, I know it's going to be something original, not the same old, same old.
Will the real JPB please stand up? :D
Goodness, a JPB story without humongous big black cocks, serial gangbangs, wimps whacking off in the closet, and daily creampies. What is the world coming to? :)
Enjoyed the story, liked the characters.
one of my favorites
of all JPB's work. I enjoy it each time I read it.
ohio
in the end
there was the slutish behavior on her part, and it was prompted by her belief of the pecuniary motivation for the marriage? swan or swine, the feelings were more than skin deep, apparently, for him, in the end.
for her, too?
CUTE
I really enjoyed it. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it. Thank you
Tongue in cheek!
The reconciliation vultures must be wondering: what the hell? I am laughing at what should be a "burn and beat" her story and nodding at the reconcilliation. In a way, nobody is likable in this story. But boy has the husband got hutspah! He is a likable rogue and she is a ditz and her father is cagey and dangerous. This IS one of JPB very best stories with all that he can do when he writes well.
One of the best!
Of all JPB's stories this is one of my very favorites. Imagine that, a happy ending! An actual romance! Along with a wild slut, of course...
Thanks, ohio
Great Read!!!!
Fun story thanks.
I agree with ohio
This is a good story. I liked the moral murkiness. The man wasn't a saint. He liked free and enthusiastic ass and getting a free education wasn't bad either.
But by the same token, love also happens. And I can see the psychology of the girl as well.
I do have a hard time buying that Alma never detected the detectives or that dad could afford that full time. But every story gets a SOD card in my book, so...
Nicely done Bob
THE SWAN
turns into the swan song.
Bit of a giggle
I like this one a lot. It's a bit of a giggle and as another reviewer put it, I like the "moral murkiness"
The title
I don't like the title. It dissuaded (is that a word?) from reading the story, but finally, when there were no worthy new stories out I decided to give it a try. The high rating of the story certainly influenced my decision. I am glad I read the story. Maybe I will have to read the rest of the series now.
Wunnerful wunnerful wunnerful.
Loved it.
An old favorite
I think this is the third or fourth reading of this classic tale.
The one thing that came out this time is how her dad essentially threw her under the bus.
Why did he pick sides against his little girl and how could he call her 'a cock crazy slut'. This suspends disbelief. Now, I would probably say it to my daughter's face as a recrimination if I were angry. To a third party? Noooo.
Dad isn't that into his Daughter for some reason. Buying her a husband, spying on her, telling her secrets out of turn.
Hell of a guy... Maybe he'll die of an aneurysm soon.
Everyone's a Shithead
There is not one decent character in this whole story. That is why there was absolutely no sense of loss at her cheating. The dramatic potential of the plot was there, but the selfish vacant characters completely sapped the tension from the story.
typical
as for as jpb goes this Is typical, either something decent or something that's complete and utter donkey spunk mixed with cow shit
1/5 and that's being INCREDIBLY FUCKING GENEROUS.
Very well-done,
but I didn't like the ending. How could anyone still love this kind of cheater enough to remarry him/her?
NO MATTER...THAT YOU USE REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY
the shit had already hit the fan. TK U MLJ LV NV
Sugna was right
Not a decent character here. But damn this was funnier than hell. I don't know who was worse? Her for becoming a slut when she got pretty or him for marrying her for the money, but I laughed hardest at the her Dad! What a schemer. Good one Bob!
Who needs decent characters?
Yes - they're all bad people. But they're funnier than hell with all their plotting and scheming! I absolutely loved this story. And the Pre-nup at the end? Perfect!
every time I read it it keeps getting funnier
So what if none of these people are candidates for sainthood, this is one funny story.
Great !!!
Great story. Seems that what goes around does in fact come around. I gave it 5 stars
and a solid 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!
Nine Lovers During Her Marriage?
Sorry, Dad. Unless you can have all nine of her lovers sent out of country, there is not a woman on this planet that I would take back until I could be assured I would never come face-to-face with them again.
Funny
This sort of tongue in cheek story was a fun read.
Hmmm
I am certain the sex with the guy in the house with him there would be it.
That's what would prevent a guy forgiving the cheating.
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