While I think this is apretty good story there are a few things that detratct from it.
In the first paragraph he says he lives with his mother in a 2 bedroom apartment.
In the paprgraph where they are discussing tanning he says they live in a house on a cul-de-sac with a privacy fence....
Which is correct?
Not enough detail .... she rolls him over to "do his front" and the next sentence is hes waking up after she sucked him off??
where are the all important details regarding that first awesome blowjob.
by
Anonymous07/09/06
When did he actually get out of bed?
In paragraph 10, he gets out of bed and is standing in front of his mom nude.....In paragraph 17, he gets out of bed AGAIN...so which is it? does he get out of bed in #10 or #17? I don't like being confused, even a little bit, when I'm reading stories.
by
Anonymous07/09/06
Don,t stop now!
I want to keep up with this relationship. Keep your mind turning and your fingers moving.
by
Anonymous07/09/06
Hot Damn!!
Hottest story I've read in a long time. Please continue with this storyline. I can't wait for the two girls to show up!
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W hen did he actually get out of bed?
07/09/06 By: Anonymous in USA
In paragraph 10, he gets out of bed and is standing in front of his mom nude.....In paragraph 17, he gets out of bed AGAIN...so which is it? does he get out of bed in #10 or #17? I don't like being confused, even a little bit, when I'm reading stories.
** It's both. You must have skipped over paragraph 11, where he gets back into bed and covers up. **
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pretty good story
07/09/06 By: LustyTexan in usa
While I think this is apretty good story there are a few things that detratct from it.
In the first paragraph he says he lives with his mother in a 2 bedroom apartment. In the paprgraph where they are discussing tanning he says they live in a house on a cul-de-sac with a privacy fence....
Which is correct?
** I have fired my continuity girl. Thanks for the correction. **
Not enough detail .... she rolls him over to "do his front" and the next sentence is hes waking up after she sucked him off?? where are the all important details regarding that first awesome blowjob.
** Those all-important details are way back on Friday, because that's when the first awesome blowjob actually occurs. **
by
Anonymous07/09/06
Awesomely hot story.
Can't wait for the continuiation of the story. Anyway, you should thank your lucky star to have a hot mom like that.Trust me, cause I am a hot mom too. Only moms knows what's best for their loving sons and due to that, my son is currently enjoying my undivided sexual and affectionate attention as much as I am enjoying his acceptionally long and thick hard dick each time he fuck my mouth ass and tight wet pussy. Like your mom, I too love the taste of cum trickling down my throat. However, feeling his thick, creamy cum being shot deep inside my pussy is still the best.
by
Anonymous07/10/06
ZZZZZZZZZZZ SNORE
This is uninspired, stupid, juvenile and lame typing. Mistakes galore and pathetic your choice in smoking dope to intitiate nudity by simply waking up naked.
Must be something new, get naked, hit a joint, pass out and somehow end up in bed with covers on you.
by
Anonymous07/10/06
Critics
I can't believe that people would critcise your story.
Anybody going for a pulitzur here.
lighten up on the author fellow pervs
I can't believe that people would critcise your story.
Anybody going for a pulitzur here.
lighten up on the author fellow pervs
by
Anonymous07/10/06
On Target
Great incest story for an incest afecionado. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous07/10/06
Fantastic!
Just amazing. It got me immediately. One of the best I've ever read on this site. Please continue posting here, whether or not you continue this one. And thanks!
by
Anonymous07/10/06
GR-8 STORY- PLEASE CONTINUE
This was a GREAT STORY, I LOVED it. Please continue with follow up stories and as I see it, your a very TALENTED AUTHOR and I can't hardly wait to read more. I have enjoyed this site for a long time and this is only the 2nd comment I've left. I felt I had to tell you so PLEASE WRITE MORE....
by
Anonymous07/10/06
Too Hot
Was reading your story at work during lunch and got so hot I jerked off right at my desk. Please continue with this tale we need more of the hottest Mom ever!
Er, I accidentally sent my previous comment as an anonymous comment. djhacku_inthetitswitha_wakizashi@yahoo.com
haha haha It was an outstanding section, and I enjoyed it like crazy.
This was excellent.
I think the slow and steady build-up of the actual section is what really made it work. The mother was endearing. That one sentence about lukewarm coffee was really thoughtful. It's simple and doesn't have too much baggage attached. Dude, I was totally waiting for the mom to give him a blowjob. I WAS WAITING. 8D!!!!
that was hella awesome; if it keeps this pace, its orgasmo level will sky-rocket.
Mom started cumming and thrashing around again. "Yeah, oh, YEAH RICK, POUND ME!! POUND THAT FAT COCK INTO ME!! SQUIRT YOUR CUM INTO MOMMY LIKE YOU SQUIRTED IT INTO JENNY'S MOUTH, LIKE YOUR GONNA SQUIRT IT IN THEIR FACES TOMORROW WHILE I WATCH, OH GOD, BABY, FUCK ME HARD!!!" < THAT right there is the best part-- omfg this was hilarious!
No, but really, the part where she was "milking" his dick, "willing" him to cum-- those were some great word choices. That and "pistoning". there was a lot of effective word usage going on, which I really enjoyed. It was hella hilarious. I don't know why you didn't public comment the second chapter, but I was going to advise that you just take out that educational part about incest and go straight to her talking about her being a nympho.
And is it possible for a long-time nympho to still be that tight? Unless she had been holding it in for four years and naturally contracted to her original tightness, which might not be too likely. You might want to throw more descriptions about her amazing ability to manually contract and make Rick feel as if she was a first-timer. Something like that.
Otherwise, I can't wait for the rest. Man, what a kick! Great job!
by
Anonymous07/12/06
GREAT STORY
GREAT STORY HAD A GREAT TIME READING IT WITH MY MOTHER THAN HAD A WONFERFULL TIMA AFTER IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN
THANKS
Even though it had a pretty definite ending, I'd love
to read a sequel to this. Maybe the mother envites her friend,
the one who gives her a bikini wax, over, and they all have
a threesome?
by
Anonymous01/01/07
HOT!!
PERFECT!! WELDONE KEEP IT UP
by
Anonymous02/11/07
love this story
i've read it a dozen times. still gets me off.
by
Anonymous09/07/07
Seductivly Penned
Awesome - This is such a believable event.
Well written with smooth flowing seduction, slow to build but perhaps a bit overdone in this episode with the younger girl. Bring on Mums Girlfriend - soon - Please.
by
Anonymous10/23/07
Nice seduction
I enjoyed the seduction and steamy hot sex. I was a little put off by your mom being such an easy slut. I can accept a nympho being a mother, but these stories work better if she is coaxed into it a bit more. Overall, great.
by
Anonymous05/26/08
Just Terrific
Its all been said by others, but I wanted to add my congratulations on a terrific story, patiently crafted and a real turn on. More, more, more please.
by
Anonymous06/27/08
lucky son
Awesome story! Wish my mom was like that! If she was, I would have never gotten a girlfriend, gotten married, and moved out. Fantastic fantasy! I had to keep myself from cumming until you came inside her!
by
Anonymous07/08/08
...MOM gets BLACKED...!!!
...if sonny gets two girls...then MOM should get two BLACK STALLIONS!!!...it's only fair!!!...YOU GO GIRL!!!...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXOOXOOOO...;)))
by
Anonymous10/10/08
mother of a hot son
very good tale but i have omostt the same i think that you have copy a little because me and my sex have olso sex every day but i ask him and he is only 13 but i love it and he loves it so why qhit so just don`t copy okey
by
Anonymous02/24/09
her son's 8-incher
This is a great story, and quite believable! Rick is embarrassed the first time his Mom gets a good look at his hard on, but typical young male that he is, that soon gives way to growing enjoyment and he shows it to her again and again! His mother is fascinated by her son's big stiff prick, she keeps looking and staring at it! Rick's Mom is acting like any mother would--she feels a deep maternal love and attraction to her boy's hard cock! Then when she watches him whack off and gazes at his spurting prick as it gushes out the product of his potent teenage balls, Mom is totally captivated! It's only a matter of time till Mom spreads her legs for Rick and welcomes him back into the cunt he came out of! His mother NEEDS to feel him blow his balls up her welcoming twat, and Rick is real proud to oblige her! A boy's dream come true!
by
Anonymous02/25/09
Keep writing !
Why not a second Ch. of this hot story ? I think I would like more caracters in this erotich adventure ! Maybe a brother.....or the virginboy next door ! Some female friends from his mother...aunt Bea ....
I'm looking out for Ch. 2.....and more....why not a female teacher who can seduce Rick...a threesome with his girlfriend....etc.....
A fan of erotic inceststories.
Great read, blew my load very quickly. Thank goodness you didn't write about fucking her up the arse when she wasn't expecting it. But then again maybe she'd like that - I know I'd like to fuck her in the arse. (perhaps part 2?)
by
Anonymous05/18/09
shit
This is not a good story, you are all a man and no woman says no? come on its more a fantasy of a kid. Not bad but not good
by
Anonymous06/30/09
Hot Read
It's all good. One of the hottest stories. Very sexy, wish there was a second chapter.
by
Anonymous10/20/09
Horny mom-in law
You make me want to fuck my horny mom-in law's ass and pour my sperms in it then sucking it out. We read this together with her and eat each others cum. she tells me to open my mouth as she masturbates and squirts her cunt juice in it. Today she peed in my mouth for the first time and it felt so good.
by
Anonymous10/26/09
if only mothers and sons would open up their minds
This is a wonderfully written tale of hot motherfucking. It's the story of many thousands of mothers and sons today (maybe tens or hundreds of thousands!). It could be the story of very many more if only mothers and their sons would open up their minds! Of course there's the shitty little taboo that keeps a boy from openly thinking of his mom's tits and above all her delectable mommy-twat, just as it averts his mother's gaze from the big bulge in her boy's pants. But the son keeps on thinking about the cunt waiting for him between his mother's legs anyway, and his mom's cunt oozes thinking how much good her son's big fat prick can do stuffing her empty gaping twat. A boy needs to unload his potent young balls up the cunt he came out of--his own birth canal!--and a mother needs to feel her boy's rich creamy sperm filling and overflowing her loving twat. If only they'd open up their minds!
by
Anonymous11/23/09
Brilliant story
and really enjoyed reading it - love the way it builds up until they finally fuck - hope you add to it about the fuck sessions with the two girls and perhaps his mom gets a bit of girl on girl action. Nice one.
by
Anonymous12/11/09
he cumes santa chrstams is he great mom son
i real love mother and son story love them thank you for this story great keep the story cuming thanks have great christms and new year from jeffrey in australia tak care
this is the second time I've read this story and still loved it. One of the better stories of its kind.
by
Anonymous06/27/10
Best story i have read
This is certainly one of the best stories that i have read.I read this story everyday,then watch porn and jack off thinking of my shy but really sexy mother.I wish i had a mother like rick's,one who would do a handjob or a blowjob anytime i needed it.Great story,keep it up:)
English
Oh, YEAH!
More, please!!
great buildup!
very nice buildup. Maybe a bit more detail on the actual fucking would be nice. But it was a great story!
good start
please continue with this good story
pretty good story
While I think this is apretty good story there are a few things that detratct from it.
In the first paragraph he says he lives with his mother in a 2 bedroom apartment.
In the paprgraph where they are discussing tanning he says they live in a house on a cul-de-sac with a privacy fence....
Which is correct?
Not enough detail .... she rolls him over to "do his front" and the next sentence is hes waking up after she sucked him off??
where are the all important details regarding that first awesome blowjob.
When did he actually get out of bed?
In paragraph 10, he gets out of bed and is standing in front of his mom nude.....In paragraph 17, he gets out of bed AGAIN...so which is it? does he get out of bed in #10 or #17? I don't like being confused, even a little bit, when I'm reading stories.
Don,t stop now!
I want to keep up with this relationship. Keep your mind turning and your fingers moving.
Hot Damn!!
Hottest story I've read in a long time. Please continue with this storyline. I can't wait for the two girls to show up!
1 for 3 so far...
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W hen did he actually get out of bed?
07/09/06 By: Anonymous in USA
In paragraph 10, he gets out of bed and is standing in front of his mom nude.....In paragraph 17, he gets out of bed AGAIN...so which is it? does he get out of bed in #10 or #17? I don't like being confused, even a little bit, when I'm reading stories.
** It's both. You must have skipped over paragraph 11, where he gets back into bed and covers up. **
-------------------------------------------- ---
pretty good story
07/09/06 By: LustyTexan in usa
While I think this is apretty good story there are a few things that detratct from it.
In the first paragraph he says he lives with his mother in a 2 bedroom apartment. In the paprgraph where they are discussing tanning he says they live in a house on a cul-de-sac with a privacy fence....
Which is correct?
** I have fired my continuity girl. Thanks for the correction. **
Not enough detail .... she rolls him over to "do his front" and the next sentence is hes waking up after she sucked him off?? where are the all important details regarding that first awesome blowjob.
** Those all-important details are way back on Friday, because that's when the first awesome blowjob actually occurs. **
Awesomely hot story.
Can't wait for the continuiation of the story. Anyway, you should thank your lucky star to have a hot mom like that.Trust me, cause I am a hot mom too. Only moms knows what's best for their loving sons and due to that, my son is currently enjoying my undivided sexual and affectionate attention as much as I am enjoying his acceptionally long and thick hard dick each time he fuck my mouth ass and tight wet pussy. Like your mom, I too love the taste of cum trickling down my throat. However, feeling his thick, creamy cum being shot deep inside my pussy is still the best.
ZZZZZZZZZZZ SNORE
This is uninspired, stupid, juvenile and lame typing. Mistakes galore and pathetic your choice in smoking dope to intitiate nudity by simply waking up naked.
Must be something new, get naked, hit a joint, pass out and somehow end up in bed with covers on you.
Critics
I can't believe that people would critcise your story.
Anybody going for a pulitzur here.
lighten up on the author fellow pervs
Critics
I can't believe that people would critcise your story.
Anybody going for a pulitzur here.
lighten up on the author fellow pervs
On Target
Great incest story for an incest afecionado. Keep up the good work.
Fantastic!
Just amazing. It got me immediately. One of the best I've ever read on this site. Please continue posting here, whether or not you continue this one. And thanks!
GR-8 STORY- PLEASE CONTINUE
This was a GREAT STORY, I LOVED it. Please continue with follow up stories and as I see it, your a very TALENTED AUTHOR and I can't hardly wait to read more. I have enjoyed this site for a long time and this is only the 2nd comment I've left. I felt I had to tell you so PLEASE WRITE MORE....
Too Hot
Was reading your story at work during lunch and got so hot I jerked off right at my desk. Please continue with this tale we need more of the hottest Mom ever!
Keep it going
I thought the story was very hot!!!
Most Excellent.
Er, I accidentally sent my previous comment as an anonymous comment. djhacku_inthetitswitha_wakizashi@yahoo.com
haha haha It was an outstanding section, and I enjoyed it like crazy.
This was excellent.
I think the slow and steady build-up of the actual section is what really made it work. The mother was endearing. That one sentence about lukewarm coffee was really thoughtful. It's simple and doesn't have too much baggage attached. Dude, I was totally waiting for the mom to give him a blowjob. I WAS WAITING. 8D!!!!
that was hella awesome; if it keeps this pace, its orgasmo level will sky-rocket.
Great job with this.
DUDE, HILARIOUS!
L O FUCKIN' L
Man, this was short, sweet and great. holy hell.
Mom started cumming and thrashing around again. "Yeah, oh, YEAH RICK, POUND ME!! POUND THAT FAT COCK INTO ME!! SQUIRT YOUR CUM INTO MOMMY LIKE YOU SQUIRTED IT INTO JENNY'S MOUTH, LIKE YOUR GONNA SQUIRT IT IN THEIR FACES TOMORROW WHILE I WATCH, OH GOD, BABY, FUCK ME HARD!!!" < THAT right there is the best part-- omfg this was hilarious!
No, but really, the part where she was "milking" his dick, "willing" him to cum-- those were some great word choices. That and "pistoning". there was a lot of effective word usage going on, which I really enjoyed. It was hella hilarious. I don't know why you didn't public comment the second chapter, but I was going to advise that you just take out that educational part about incest and go straight to her talking about her being a nympho.
And is it possible for a long-time nympho to still be that tight? Unless she had been holding it in for four years and naturally contracted to her original tightness, which might not be too likely. You might want to throw more descriptions about her amazing ability to manually contract and make Rick feel as if she was a first-timer. Something like that.
Otherwise, I can't wait for the rest. Man, what a kick! Great job!
GREAT STORY
GREAT STORY HAD A GREAT TIME READING IT WITH MY MOTHER THAN HAD A WONFERFULL TIMA AFTER IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN
THANKS
Fantastic
This was great. Now, how about tommorrow? There MUST be a next day!!!.
justme601000@yahoo.com
HOT STUFF
MAN KEEP IT CUMMING
He kept bragging about the size of his dickey
It got a little boring expecially since by Literotica standards it is really undersized
Fantastic!
Even though it had a pretty definite ending, I'd love
to read a sequel to this. Maybe the mother envites her friend,
the one who gives her a bikini wax, over, and they all have
a threesome?
HOT!!
PERFECT!! WELDONE KEEP IT UP
love this story
i've read it a dozen times. still gets me off.
Seductivly Penned
Awesome - This is such a believable event.
Well written with smooth flowing seduction, slow to build but perhaps a bit overdone in this episode with the younger girl. Bring on Mums Girlfriend - soon - Please.
Nice seduction
I enjoyed the seduction and steamy hot sex. I was a little put off by your mom being such an easy slut. I can accept a nympho being a mother, but these stories work better if she is coaxed into it a bit more. Overall, great.
Just Terrific
Its all been said by others, but I wanted to add my congratulations on a terrific story, patiently crafted and a real turn on. More, more, more please.
lucky son
Awesome story! Wish my mom was like that! If she was, I would have never gotten a girlfriend, gotten married, and moved out. Fantastic fantasy! I had to keep myself from cumming until you came inside her!
...MOM gets BLACKED...!!!
...if sonny gets two girls...then MOM should get two BLACK STALLIONS!!!...it's only fair!!!...YOU GO GIRL!!!...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXOOXOOOO...;)))
mother of a hot son
very good tale but i have omostt the same i think that you have copy a little because me and my sex have olso sex every day but i ask him and he is only 13 but i love it and he loves it so why qhit so just don`t copy okey
her son's 8-incher
This is a great story, and quite believable! Rick is embarrassed the first time his Mom gets a good look at his hard on, but typical young male that he is, that soon gives way to growing enjoyment and he shows it to her again and again! His mother is fascinated by her son's big stiff prick, she keeps looking and staring at it! Rick's Mom is acting like any mother would--she feels a deep maternal love and attraction to her boy's hard cock! Then when she watches him whack off and gazes at his spurting prick as it gushes out the product of his potent teenage balls, Mom is totally captivated! It's only a matter of time till Mom spreads her legs for Rick and welcomes him back into the cunt he came out of! His mother NEEDS to feel him blow his balls up her welcoming twat, and Rick is real proud to oblige her! A boy's dream come true!
Keep writing !
Why not a second Ch. of this hot story ? I think I would like more caracters in this erotich adventure ! Maybe a brother.....or the virginboy next door ! Some female friends from his mother...aunt Bea ....
I'm looking out for Ch. 2.....and more....why not a female teacher who can seduce Rick...a threesome with his girlfriend....etc.....
A fan of erotic inceststories.
How good is this woman ?
Great read, blew my load very quickly. Thank goodness you didn't write about fucking her up the arse when she wasn't expecting it. But then again maybe she'd like that - I know I'd like to fuck her in the arse. (perhaps part 2?)
shit
This is not a good story, you are all a man and no woman says no? come on its more a fantasy of a kid. Not bad but not good
Hot Read
It's all good. One of the hottest stories. Very sexy, wish there was a second chapter.
Horny mom-in law
You make me want to fuck my horny mom-in law's ass and pour my sperms in it then sucking it out. We read this together with her and eat each others cum. she tells me to open my mouth as she masturbates and squirts her cunt juice in it. Today she peed in my mouth for the first time and it felt so good.
if only mothers and sons would open up their minds
This is a wonderfully written tale of hot motherfucking. It's the story of many thousands of mothers and sons today (maybe tens or hundreds of thousands!). It could be the story of very many more if only mothers and their sons would open up their minds! Of course there's the shitty little taboo that keeps a boy from openly thinking of his mom's tits and above all her delectable mommy-twat, just as it averts his mother's gaze from the big bulge in her boy's pants. But the son keeps on thinking about the cunt waiting for him between his mother's legs anyway, and his mom's cunt oozes thinking how much good her son's big fat prick can do stuffing her empty gaping twat. A boy needs to unload his potent young balls up the cunt he came out of--his own birth canal!--and a mother needs to feel her boy's rich creamy sperm filling and overflowing her loving twat. If only they'd open up their minds!
Brilliant story
and really enjoyed reading it - love the way it builds up until they finally fuck - hope you add to it about the fuck sessions with the two girls and perhaps his mom gets a bit of girl on girl action. Nice one.
he cumes santa chrstams is he great mom son
i real love mother and son story love them thank you for this story great keep the story cuming thanks have great christms and new year from jeffrey in australia tak care
wow
that was hot super hot more please
Great mother son shairing
this is the second time I've read this story and still loved it. One of the better stories of its kind.
Best story i have read
This is certainly one of the best stories that i have read.I read this story everyday,then watch porn and jack off thinking of my shy but really sexy mother.I wish i had a mother like rick's,one who would do a handjob or a blowjob anytime i needed it.Great story,keep it up:)
This is HOT
Wow, this really got me going. Thank you.
Oh My God!
You had me hard the entire time and my wife is so wet right not......we are eating each other like crazy.....we will fuck now.....please excuse us.
What the fuck, man?
I was hard all the while :)
Superb
Very sexy, you clearly knows how a woman feels and how her pussy smells when she's aroused. Great story
horny
i was jacking off my big cock just about to cum all over my self
You write GOOD fuck stories...
I guess it's so taboo because few of us have experienced it... I never have, but it is hot to read!!! Ace
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