All Comments on 'A Secret Admirer'

A great story. Enjoyed it very much.

I am always impressed by a writer who is literate. You are just such a writer. The premise was great and your notes, to and from, were outstanding. Please continue to please.

I'm surprised I'm the first to leave a Comment.

But i thought the story was excellent and More of the Same would be Welcome.

Very very nice. More please!!!

with an old class mate and S.A TK U MLJ LV NV

Realy enjoyed it. Was sad she left. Thanks for a great ending

I enjoyed slowly reading that contribution, I wasn't sure why I started that way but I knew it'd be be good or just total shit. Thank you for a very positive and intriguing read, 2 single people that had somewhat of a "ships passing in the night" past long ago and the opportunity to at least have some fun sex. Excellent!

What a great way for two people to fall in love.

I went through a messy divorce that caused me to reevaluate my life and my body! Having done that I managed to get back on my feet again. Thank you for a Wonderful story! I got one of those Happily Ever After too!

YOU'RE A FUCKING GENIUS AND I LOVE YOUR STORIES. DAMN I COULD HAVE BEEN YOUR AGENT SOME YEARS BACK AS YOUR EDITOR. I KNOW YOUR INACTIVE SINCE 2013, A FUCKING SHAME FOR SURE. WELL, AGAIN I HOPE YOUR RECOVERY WAS SUCCESSFUL AND IF YOU ARE NOW WRITING UNDER ANOTHER HANDLE, I HOPE I DISCOVER IT. YOU ARE A VERY, VERY TALENTED AUTHOR AND NOT JUST A WRITER! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!

Who wouldn't be hot to have a secret admirer??? The build up was so hot and steamy....made me want to jack off..... did leak lots of precum....

Good story however you might have developed the plot a bit deeper esp. the main characters.

It felt like she was leading the guy on, after a certain point. Then it swung back around with her waiting for him. I agree with another commenter who said the story should have been developed more. It’s a good idea for a story, but as such, it won’t be memorable. I honestly wanted to like it more than I do.