by Samuelx
A story about a bisexual black stud is a great concept. You should work on developing your plots. Spending time and making a story longer by building up the sexual encounters is not necessarily a bad thing. You should get an editor that will help you develop the plots for your stories.
...has been mentioned in the new story review thread.
Sincerely,
Lizzy
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leave the fucking white women alone u slave ass
Enjoyed the story and your advice. I totally agree with you; life is too short.
Can you have a story about black bi men without including some white bitch, damn. You just confirmed the fact that black people cannot do anything on their own without including some thirsty ass white bitch