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Vivian's Story Ch. 03

bySummerElizabeth8©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/14/06

WONDERFUL !

thank you so much - that was a very nice conclusion

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by Anonymous11/22/06

Keep Going

You are a sensitive and sexy writer. Keep going!!!

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by Anonymous06/12/07

Totally awesom

it was extremely erotic and showed great talent and imagination

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by Summer4705/13/08

Red hot

Loved it. Truly red hot - in more ways than one! Keep going hun. xx

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by Anonymous07/30/08

a beautifully crafted story

The writer sets a romantic scene and captures the emotional and physical intensity of submission, the orgasmic moment and the subsequent afterglow.

I hope the author is encouraged enough to keep writing.

Mk

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