All Comments on 'Jane Doe'

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Well written, creepy and disturbing. This is an excellent tale that pushes the boundaries.

gave me goosebumps, good ones.

I think the writing could use some polish, a final edit and some revisions for flow - punctuation and word usage. With a little polish this could be be truly frightening.

Great story and really intriguing. I was on edge the whole way through it.

Great story, frightening and intriguing. I was on the edge of my seat all the way through it.

goodness. It had me holding my breath and wondering if she'd wake up and find this all a dream.

This was one of the first stories I read on Literotica, and it's haunted me for weeks! If only all the stories here were as well-written and INTERESTING! Fantastic use of detail - I could see things perfectly in my mind's eye. I kept thinking she would 'wake up' when she orgasmed, and then Larry would really kill her... I'm glad it ended like it did, and that I found it again so now I can read it and your other work. Great job!

This totally messed up my head. Got any more parts to this?

A wicked ending, loved it!

Loved it!! Great story! I would love to read a part 2.

Excellent, and erotically creepy. But I was left wanting to know HOW she felt what she did and what happened to put her in that state. I think it would have been even better if Larry was somehow responsible.

You just wrote my worse nightmare in story form! Excellent!