Really enjoy it so far. Looking forward for the next chapters
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Anonymous06/23/06
Great Start
This chapter was a great start. I already loathe Doug. He is horrid and selfish. I really want to see where this relationship with Abi and Alex goes. Please update soon. I really like this story.
Very interesting beginning. LOL! I was trying to look for page 2 only to realize hey, next chapter. Oh well, a little suspense is always good. That will give me the excuse to come check on this site everyday for the update :)
Good start. Alex sounds like a hot guy. Can't wait to see the next chapter. These two seem very interesting to watch how they'll eventually get together.
I loved the start and don't really care that much about Doug's pompous ass. He needs to be put in check and how does she or her family owe him a swift kick in the ass I would say is what they owe him.
Thank you for sharing I can't wait to read the rest.
Doug is an ASS!!! I hope whatever it is he has done for Abi's family, she can conclude soon, because he is going to be a spoiler to any type of relationship she has with anyone else. Especially Alex!
English
A good read...
Really enjoy it so far. Looking forward for the next chapters
Great Start
This chapter was a great start. I already loathe Doug. He is horrid and selfish. I really want to see where this relationship with Abi and Alex goes. Please update soon. I really like this story.
KC
Like it
Very interesting beginning. LOL! I was trying to look for page 2 only to realize hey, next chapter. Oh well, a little suspense is always good. That will give me the excuse to come check on this site everyday for the update :)
Nice
Good start. Alex sounds like a hot guy. Can't wait to see the next chapter. These two seem very interesting to watch how they'll eventually get together.
Welcome
I notice that this is your first story here. An excellent start: an interesting situation, characters with interior lives ... looking forward to more.
Nice Beginning
I can't wait to know what happens next!?!?! Please post it ASAP
Very good beginning...
Please continue. I'm dying to know what'll happen btwn the two characters.
Love It
this is awesome and Doug sounds like a Class-A ass! lol
Wonderful Start
I loved the start and don't really care that much about Doug's pompous ass. He needs to be put in check and how does she or her family owe him a swift kick in the ass I would say is what they owe him.
Thank you for sharing I can't wait to read the rest.
Good Start!
I already don't like Doug!
*****
A very impressive first effort. Glad it came to my attention.
**************Doug, Yuck!!!
Doug is an ASS!!! I hope whatever it is he has done for Abi's family, she can conclude soon, because he is going to be a spoiler to any type of relationship she has with anyone else. Especially Alex!
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