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When the Juice is Worth the Squeeze

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by matriarch06/10/06

Amazi ng

use of vocabulary, to paint a vibrant picture of struggle and adversity. Well done Scheh. Let's have more of the same. Auntie Mat. xx

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by Maria239406/10/06

good work

filled with action, not just explanation. your work has a life, I do hope to see more from you:)

maria

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by vampiredust06/11/06

I liked

the metaphor you've used here, great work

Your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews (somewhat belatedly, my apologies)

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by MissBri06/16/06

Damn...

This is fabulous. I want more!

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