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Love In Its Essence
I felt this story touched on the true essence of what love is and want to thank the author for his work.
why is this a science fiction?
science fiction is my favorite genre and i am aware of science fiction's broad domain.
this story is a perfectly fine fiction; it's about a two young people finding a special love but the guy's being drafted and sent to fight in Vietnam and got wounded and, in his delirium, started dreaming about losing his love, Joane, but when he got better and woke up, she's been by his side all along: the life he thought he had lead were just dreams and nightmares.
this is plain fiction, very much like in reality.
science fiction (and fantasy, which I'm not crazy about) deals with stories taking place in truly fantastical places, times, and circumstances that are not really possible, as it is TOLD IN THIS STORY of a man searching for the love of his life in a state of delirium due to the fact that he got one of his legs blown off fighting in Vitnam,,,,
excellent story, though, so, yes, thank you, author,,,
Brilliant!
There are only two reasons not to give this story a 100 and a 5.0.
1) Misclassification---I would have put this under Romance, but I'm just being picky
2) The reviewer who gives it less than 100/5.0 has the brains and soul of a ferret and is absolutely jealous of your writing ability.
This was absolutely brilliant
MF... you knocked my socks off.........
again..... your E.Tenn Buddy
Will be back as SliperyRox
Not enough numbers
I loved your story and I'm only sorry that the scale went from 1 to 5, because it was a perfect "10" as far as I'm concerned.
Marvelous!
I do not believe that any number could be big enough for this story! It was so very sexy and touching at the same time....it brought tears to my ears! The love expressed in this story is so strong that it is as though I was a part of it! I felt this story with my whole being! Thank you so much for a wonderful and memorable reading!
Mindblowing!
Short, simple writing, and yet great, because it captures the very essence of love.
OMG
wow i love the unexpected ending of where it was reversed. you have a very well written story and i love how descriptive you were.
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