Hunted AU: Strip Search

Well...

It's been time you start writing again. Your stuff is amazing and I have been waiting for your stories.

Amazing

Well written...please continue!!!

WOW

I loved it! It was as good as the original "Hunted." I encourage you to continue with your stories, they are astounding! Please don't keep us waiting for long!

I love it!

I love Sasha and Suzanne. The Hunted series is incredible!

cant wait..

is there a next installment?

Hell yeah!

Fucking amazing.

Absolutely Perfect!!

Your stories are the best I've ever read. Please write another sequel soon. VERY SOON!!

the best

your Hunted stories are the most amazing stories I've read in a very long time. I keep coming back to them! Please please write more.

WTF??!!??

Okay, you CANNOT just leave you story like this!! Afer reading this, I'm DYING to know what happens next. Your characters are so great. I love your other Hunted story too. I noticed you haven't updated in a very loooooooooong while, so I'm here to beg for an update. Lol, I'm shameless that way. Oh well. But seriously, your stories are way to fantastic to just leave incomplete!!

Aaayee!

Dont stop there! More purty please!

Love your writing, hoping to see more soon.

That's it...

I need more...

Once again..

The hottest story, Hunted is such a great storyline, please continue with it. I loved Shasha, he is so hot.

you are a wonderful erotic writer, I hope you can keep this going, and I wouldn;t mind knwoing what happens to Hunted characters after they hook up again. The aftermath is good too, to see if they run or hide or if he keeps her and fucks her senseless.

Very hot, enjoyed it much.

Now i'm going to bed.

XD

MistressDarkness

More please ;-)

I love your work and really can't wait to see more ;-)

I agree with some of the others it would be nice to see your stuff on paper :-)

omg nooo!

omg I was so into it , you can't just leave it like that pleasseeee add morrree I loovve it lol its really hot

!!!

more, more, more!!!

Can't stop reading!

Totally hot! Makes me want Sasha's mouth between my legs! Please write more.

gosh!

that was hot! i'm not really into non-consent, but your hunted series is great!

O.O

I hope this isnt the end yet!!! Cliffhanger!!!! >.

Continue More!!

Cliffhanger? Continue please. Hope there's another chapter. I keep reading this series. Add more chapters like you did with Hunted.

amazing

your hunted series is amazing, without a doubt the best stuff I have read on this site

Brilliant

I love this series. I am amazed at how well you capture the heat and intensity of true domination. I would love to find a Sasha of my own. Thank you for these erotic gems. Your writing is superb, more please! !!

What?

Cliffhanger? It looks like a chapter that got hacked in the middle with a knife. There wasn't... even... a sense of closure. :(

Sasha

I want to fuck Sasha. I love these stories.

Sasha

I want Sasha to fuck me... :)

Please write a follow up

I really love this story, but it really makes me want to know what happened between them next. I would love to see a follow up chapter for this story, I think it would get a massive response.

I want a Sasha too!!

I have truly enjoyed this story in all it's incarnations.... I do wish you would add another chapter or two to this one... the follow up telling us what Sasha did with Suzanne would be most welcome... did he keep her forever, his captive in his home, did he release her to go on her way... or worse, did he kill her or have the grunts come in and enjoy her too??

Amazing.

Read hunted first and then read this.I think it would be better if it was a story that carries on otherwise technically it is not a series.

Yeah.....make a whole story......and add some boob details bro.....make me cum...

Good start but....

This was like 60 minutes of foreplay and 10 seconds of screwing. A good lead-in, but......wham, bam -- no description of the sex. Disappointing.

Mmmm, THANK YOU, exactly what I want when I look for noncon - something hard edged and erotic, in the realm of escapist fiction without being sugar-coated or pretending it's a good thing that's happening. Suzanne's terror was palpable, the violence frightening and the sex electric.

o_o Puppy Dog Eyes

Whaaaaa? I read the submission Hunted first, then I read this. There was no lead up from Hunted to this. What happened after Sasha found Suzanne and they decided to live together? Did they or did they not? Needs a transition!!! Write another installment, furrybert! Pleeeeeease....

Always the same

Always the same story and also unfinished this time.
Not so good, sorry.