Action and mystery dot this deeply reflective, yet opaque essay. The main character feels more human in this installment. Great love scene in the forest, and another where a confused lady wonders about herself and her project. Leaves lots of room to make the next installment or two powerful. We'll see. I like ti a lot.
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Anonymous03/24/08
Enjoyed this one!
I especially liked the scene in the park. :)
But overall the stories have a good flow.
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Action and Mystery
Action and mystery dot this deeply reflective, yet opaque essay. The main character feels more human in this installment. Great love scene in the forest, and another where a confused lady wonders about herself and her project. Leaves lots of room to make the next installment or two powerful. We'll see. I like ti a lot.
Enjoyed this one!
I especially liked the scene in the park. :)
But overall the stories have a good flow.
I'd love for her to wind up with Andy actually...
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