All Comments on 'Rough Tongues and Sharp Teeth'

by AvayaNox

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hornyinwvhornyinwvover 17 years ago
I'm Loving it...

This story is reminiscient of Anne Rice, I like your style in it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Someone read the Sookie Stackhouse novels

I almost never leave harsh comments but my god! Between the obvious ripoff and the spelling errors i couldn't get through the first page!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice rhythm

Your style of writing has a nice flow, certainly enough to keep my attention even without blatantly sexual content. It will be interesting to see how you develop the story.

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004about 9 years ago
Yes indeed !

You've caught my attention ! Please give me more !

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