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Rough Tongues and Sharp Teeth

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by hornyinwv08/16/06

I'm Loving it...

This story is reminiscient of Anne Rice, I like your style in it.

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by Anonymous07/09/09

Someone read the Sookie Stackhouse novels

I almost never leave harsh comments but my god! Between the obvious ripoff and the spelling errors i couldn't get through the first page!

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by Anonymous12/22/10

Nice rhythm

Your style of writing has a nice flow, certainly enough to keep my attention even without blatantly sexual content. It will be interesting to see how you develop the story.

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