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A New Adventure Ch. 01

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by Anonymous06/20/06

Good Start

Great Story, bit of proof reading would have found the obvious typos but it did no detract from a senusous tale, like the twist at the end too. As this is Chapter one when is Chapter two going to be out ?

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by freshrope_6906/20/06

Loved the story

I can relate to this story. I really enjoyed the build up and the results, but please do not make us wait long for chapter 2.

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